Love the scarf, and I think you did a good job with the foreshortening on her face! But because she’s tilting her head down, I think her shoulders are set too low, as if she is looking straight ahead. Her right hand (holding the stylus) is also smaller than her left.

HAHAHA!!! I am glad you catch the shoulder thing! Yeah, I noticed it, but I kinda too lazy to fix the whole thing since it was too late. Oh, thanks for pointed out the hands, I didn’t notice that!